Third Draft

Have drafted the whole assignment now. The word count is proving restrictive, so i have shown it up until she is about to go for her photo shoot. However, the relationships and character shave been introduced, as well as the first real satisfying beating of the bullies. I feel taht the few chapters written include material to draw the reader in to want to see what happens for the rest of the book. Now it just needs editing as some words need to be cut and i think it is convuluteds in its writing in places. i want to keep the pace fast as she is a witty girl, and the elements of humour wouldn't work otherwise.